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It's a comic.  My first real comic.  A short 3 panel one page comic, but a comic nonetheless.

It's also the first time I've used the breast expansion theme.  It's not going to be the last, but it's not something I'll do that often.

There will be more comics.  My goal is to create a web comic that updates at least once per week.  There are still technical hurdles to overcome and I'll need to be able to produce images much faster before I can do that.  Right now I'm posting one image per week.  Once I'm able to consistently produce two images per week, I'll try to jump to starting my weekly web comic.  Until then I'll only be making more comics for experiment and practice.

I'll start making more explicit art soon.  We all know I can't show that here on Deviant art, so I have a tumblr page over at LarryBrunder.tumblr.com.  For now it's the same images as here, but that's where I'll be putting all the risqué stuff.  So if you want to be alerted, go over there and follow.

I'll post my next image on 3/23/15.  It'll probably be a pin up.
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Story idea is good and well plotted out. Models are good and there is enough to give a sense of the world. Things to improve are the glass textures, they need to be reflective as well as transparent. Just making them transparent gives them an unreal distracting feel. People notice they don't look right and shifts their focus to them. Next is a big one, lighting is the make or break of 3D. You can have the best scene in the world, awesome models, flawless textures and totally ruin it with shoddy lighting.

Above you used enviromental lighting it looks like. It's awful, great for building the scene, but that is it. It makes everything flat and washed out. Do some searches on three point lighting set ups and dramatic lighting. Trust me this will push this from good and well done into the realm of awesome.

Keep working as this has lots of potential.
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:iconwilnet1tractor:
wilnet1tractor Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015
SHe probably thinking, help.
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:iconlarrybrunder:
LarryBrunder Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, she'll be thinking that soon.  At the time of the third panel she's still at the 'WTF?!' stage.
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:iconwilnet1tractor:
wilnet1tractor Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015
She'd probably get laughed @. ;)
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:iconrespectfulramone:
RespectfulRamone Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015
Love it.
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:iconlarrybrunder:
LarryBrunder Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!  There will be more comix.  Not in the next few weeks, but there will be more.
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:iconradicaldanny:
RadicalDanny Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015
How would a relationship work between a human sized elf and a small pixie anyway? XD
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:iconlarrybrunder:
LarryBrunder Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A relationship probably wouldn't work, but they could probably have pulled off a single tryst if she'd used that potion of growth without screwing it up. :)
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Knight3000 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oops!!!
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:iconlarrybrunder:
LarryBrunder Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The potions didn't turn out the way she thought, but I don't think the elf she's after will reject her...
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:iconknight3000:
Knight3000 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No she`ll like it! but she`s lucky she just got huge boobs as mixing potions can sometimes be VERY explosive!
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ChalkArtist1216 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like how she's flying and drinking at the same time! :clap:
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:iconlarrybrunder:
LarryBrunder Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pixie feet are for tickling, not walking... :)
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:iconchalkartist1216:
ChalkArtist1216 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOL :D
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